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With tears of blood and bodies cold

January 16, 2013

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With tears of blood and bodies cold,
We watched you watch the night unfold,
With breaths entangled in a mesh,
Sat beneath your brother’s flesh.

We saw it under the murderous skies,
We watched you as you watched them die,
We saw your tears, we heard your cries,
Pleading, screaming, asking ‘Why?’,

Paving the way to distorted salvation,
Blind to justice, deaf to persuasion,
Rummaging through from nation to nation,
Is this the fate of God’s fine creation?

We heard you as your mothers’ wept,
As bodies of their children slept,
In boxes hard, in boxes cold,
Listening to the tale unfold.

A story of eighty seven lives,
Dreams of who did not survive,
Murdered under the murderous skies,
We heard their voices in disguise;

“Do not rest till the tale is told,
Do not dig a single hole,
Do not offer our final prayer,
We do not wish to be taken there.

Sit beneath our freezing flesh,
With breaths entangled in a mesh,
Turn your hearts into stone,
We are not forgotten, you are not alone.

Our brothers and sisters will surely come,
To show that we are truly one,
Until the day they do arrive,
Sit beneath our flesh and strive.

For in our blood runs sacrifice,
For that we surely paid the price,
But do not rest till the tale is told,
Do not dig a single hole,
Do not offer our final prayer,
We do not wish to be taken there.”

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Readers Comments (19)

  • Reply jan Jan 16, 2013 - 2:20AM

    nice keep it upRecommend

  • Reply Naema Afaqi Jan 16, 2013 - 8:59AM

    Your words echo every Pakistani’s feelings. We are for sure against these brutalities. May Allah bless our country.Recommend

  • Reply khan Jan 16, 2013 - 9:18AM

    RIP!Recommend

  • Reply Habib Ur Rehman Jan 16, 2013 - 10:36AM

    Reminded me of my trip to Quetta…. Excellently written BRAVO!!Recommend

  • Reply Shabbir Jan 16, 2013 - 11:59AM

    Very nice, WelldoneRecommend

  • Reply Salar khan Tareen Jan 16, 2013 - 12:13PM

    in those bomb blasts more the 120 people were killed but in this poem u people have mentioned the number of 87 only………….. its not Good. those who were not hazaras where they also not human????????????????????????????? think over itRecommend

  • Reply Hira Jan 16, 2013 - 12:16PM

    Brought tears to my eyes. Beautifully written.Recommend

  • Reply brave xoul Jan 16, 2013 - 12:37PM

    One can only stand by their side in this cause other wise no one can lessen their pain and no one can bring the lost lives back lets show some unity it is the least that we can do….Recommend

  • Reply Raja Jan 16, 2013 - 12:45PM

    its very Sad :( I am just make cry blood tears :(Recommend

  • Reply gp65 Jan 16, 2013 - 12:47PM

    @Author : Very moving. This whole episode shows what the quiet determination of a courageous and resolute people can achieve without any threats or violence. Salute the people at Alamdar.

    @Salar khan Tareen: “in those bomb blasts more the 120 people were killed but in this poem u people have mentioned the number of 87 only”

    The poem refers to those who were not buried as mentioned by
    ““Do not rest till the tale is told,
    Do not dig a single hole,
    Do not offer our final prayer,
    We do not wish to be taken there”Recommend

  • Reply Shan-e-Haider Changezi Jan 16, 2013 - 1:02PM

    @Salar khan Tareen:
    Mr Tareen think out of the box,the poem shows the feelings of the families who where in the “sit in” with the bodies of their loved ones, as a human being we should not tolerate killing of any innocent single individual, please dont divide the nation into cast or religions, we should have to have a single voice at this point in time…

    By the way nice poem..Recommend

  • Reply DANY Jan 16, 2013 - 2:22PM

    Heart touchingRecommend

  • Reply Salar khan Tareen Jan 16, 2013 - 2:46PM

    Mr. Changezi

    I am 1000% agree with you. and i am also not dividing nation. I also have sympathy for Changezai/ Hazaras. that what so ever is happening with them is not good……. We are condemning this too.
    My point of view was just to share and inform the people that in those blasts 87 people were not killed in that day the residents of Quetta got more the 120 Death Bodies of their beloved citizens and more then 200 people are injured and few of them are in a very critical condition. Pray for them AlsoRecommend

  • Reply ali Jan 16, 2013 - 3:01PM

    @Salar khan Tareen:
    i think Sabreena mentioned the feelings of depressed community….anyhow poem is really beatiful.Recommend

  • Reply sabreena Jan 16, 2013 - 7:42PM

    I am really humbled by your kind comments, and yes the specific imagery is of the dharna which is why I mentioned 87 lives. I am sooo proud of their families’ strength, patience, resilience and faith. In essence however this is dedicated from us to every single Pakistani that has lost their life to terror/conflict. May they rest in peace, ameen.Recommend

  • Reply SKhan Jan 16, 2013 - 10:13PM

    Very touching.Recommend

  • Reply Parvez Jan 16, 2013 - 10:53PM

    I am not one for poetry but with your simple yet powerful style, you had me riveted.Recommend

  • Reply Ali Jan 17, 2013 - 11:48AM

    My grandfather needs an electric heater all the time as winter season is on its peak. One day there was No Electricity in our home due to some problem in my electricity meter. I decided to call the electrician but couldn’t do so because there was another problem waiting for me and that was the closure of mobile phone services. My grandfather was not in a good condition. We had no landline in our home. I went to my neighbour’s home and called from there. After this incident today I have my own landline connection. Because I don’t want to face this kind of situation again.Recommend

  • Reply Hina Feb 11, 2013 - 9:49AM

    In one word, the expression was

    “OUTSTANDING”Recommend

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